Part 1.
I knew I wanted to be screenwriter........
I realized that a story I was trying to write as a novel would be much better
shown visually and with music, as it was a music-driven
story – an interracial love story set in Mississippi in the
mid-70s, focused around a teen band. That was a little over
two years ago, and turned into my first screenplay, AT LAST.
I know I've succeeded........
I know I’m on the path to success, and I’ve been very
fortunate so far in a very short time. All of my works have
placed or won screenwriting competitions, and my first
screenplay now has a Director attached who has been involved
with three movies nominated for the Academy Award for Best
Picture. I have four television projects and another
screenplay (other than Missing Sydney) that are currently
either optioned or under serious consideration by major
production companies and television networks. But I’ll know
I’ve truly succeeded when the first feature film or
television project that I wrote or produced makes it onto
the screen.
My
inspiration to write Missing Sydney.....
came from my niece Camille and her best friend Sharon. Both
are ethnically Chinese, with somewhat overbearing,
controlling “Tiger Moms” who grew up in China and are fairly
recent immigrants. As my wife and I were driving to my
niece’s high school graduation, I overheard a conversation
between my wife and her sister in Chinese. I didn’t
understand all of it, but figured out that they were
throwing a graduation party for my niece because my
sister-in-law’s co-worker told her that was common practice
in the United States. I told my wife “I hope they remembered
to invite some of Camille’s friends”, imagining a graduation
party filled with adults, as they did for Benjamin in
opening of THE GRADUATE. We started laughing so much I
nearly drove the car off the road. By the time we got to the
graduation ceremony an hour or so later, we had the basis of
the story plotted out.
Part 2.
FilmMakers
Magazine:
What
inspired you to write?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
I wanted
to try my hand at writing fiction for years, but never had
time due to work constraints. During the economic downturn
of 2008 – 2010, my business activities slowed down
considerably. I decided to use my free time to write
fictionalized versions of two unique stories inspired by
real people I know and actual events in my life.
FilmMakers Magazine: How did you prepare yourself to write your first script?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
When I
realized that my stories might be better suited as
screenplays than novels, I recognized that I needed to learn
the format and craft of screenwriting. I found a four-day
intensive class “Writing Your First Screenplay” through UCLA
Extension. My instructor and fellow classmates thought that
both of my ideas were interesting and that I should pursue
them. I developed outlines in that class, and then did
one-on-one mentorship's with several produced screenwriters
that helped guide me in the completion of my first drafts. I
was then accepted into the UCLA Graduate Film School’s
Professional Screenwriting Program on the basis of that
first draft of my first script.
FilmMakers Magazine: Is this your first script
and how long did it take you to complete?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
GUIDE 2
PARENTS was my third script, but the first that I undertook
and completed in the UCLA Professional Screenwriting
Program. The draft I submitted to the Filmmakers
International Screenwriting Competition (my first draft)
took twenty weeks to complete, as I wrote it according to
the schedule of a screenwriting class. My other screenplays
have taken from four to ten weeks from beginning an outline
to completion of a first draft. Rewriting typically takes an
equal or greater amount of time, over multiple drafts.
FilmMakers Magazine: Do you have a set
routine, place and time management for writing?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
I
typically write from my home office, although I’m thinking
about stories, scenes and dialogue all the time, and write
anytime and anywhere – even on vacation, which sometimes
drives my wife crazy. I don’t have a set time that I write –
it all depends on what else is going on with my life and
work. If I have a deadline imposed by a writing class, a
writing group, or client I find that I am much more
effective and efficient.
FilmMakers
Magazine: Do you believe screenplay contests are
important for aspiring screenwriters and why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
I think
they can be highly valuable. Most aspiring screenwriters
work in a near vacuum: they write on their own, and hope
that what they write will be appealing. But every writer
needs feedback, and not just from close friends and loved
ones, but from professionals in the industry. Screenwriting
competitions are a great way to get that feedback,
particularly if you can purchase judging notes. If you do
well in a contest that says that at least somebody likes
what you are doing. But many scripts that win contests don’t
end up getting produced, and the exact same script can win
one contest, and not even make it to the second round of
another. Scripts are both art and craft, and the artistic
piece of it is going to appeal to different readers in
different ways at different times. Don’t think that just
because you won a contest you’ve got the next Oscar winner,
and don’t think that just because you didn’t place in a
contest that you are a failure. But if you are consistently
striking out, you should use that feedback get professional
writing help to figure out what you could do better.
FilmMakers
Magazine: What influenced you to enter the FilmMakers
International Screenwriting Awards
/ Screenplay Contest?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
I entered
this contest because it was one of the better-known,
reputable contests. Unfortunately, there are many contests
that seem to exist primarily as a way to make money from the
entry fees.
FilmMakers Magazine: What script would you
urge aspiring writers to read and why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
There is
no single script I would recommend as the “must read” for
aspiring screenwriters. I think aspiring screenwriters
should read as many scripts they can of movies they like –
particularly if they tend to write in a particular genre.
Beyond that, they should read scripts of movies considered
great outside of their own genres. You can learn a lot by
reading scripts of movies considered modern classics, or
that have done very well at the box office.
FilmMakers
Magazine: Beside screenwriting what are you passionate
about and why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw: I love all aspects of creating and
telling stories on film and television – acting, producing,
directing, music, lighting –pulling art and craft together
to create a story told in a visual medium. Outside of movies
and television, I’m passionate about music – particularly
jazz - and great food and wine. All of which are forms of
art that are ephemeral and highly enjoyable to consume!
FilmMakers Magazine: Who is your favorite
Screenwriter and Why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw: I really admire William Goldman and
Lawrence Kasdan. Both have had amazing careers and written
or adaptedmany wonderful stories across multiple genres. But
at the core, their writing is about people and their
interactions, rather than being plot and spectacle driven,
even if the movies happen to be action-oriented
spectaculars.
FilmMakers
Magazine: Name the director you would love to work with
and why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw: Of living directors it would be Francis
Ford Coppola. He’s a writer and director who understands how
to tell a story, and has done so across many genres, from
family movies to crime thrillers to war. I personally think
that The Godfather and The Godfather II are among the best
movies ever made. I also love what Alexander Payne and Clint
Eastwood have done, because they are also all about the
story. From a visual aspect I think Ridley Scott is amazing.
The visuals (and stories) of Blade Runner and Gladiator blow
me away every time I watch them.
FilmMakers
Magazine: Name the actor you would love to work with and
why?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
There are
many I admire, but if I had to pick only one it would be
Meryl Streep. I bet most of my classmates in the acting
studio I’ve been involved with for the past year would
likely say the same. Meryl Streep portrays her characters
with such authenticity that I almost always forget I’m
watching “Meryl Streep.” That’s what great acting is all
about. By the way, I think all writers and directors can
learn how to write and tell a story better from studying
acting and working with actors.
FilmMakers Magazine: Any tips and things
learned along the way to pass on to others?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw:
A) Take
screenwriting classes – there are classes at most colleges,
and several good ones available on-line, including from
UCLA. B) Get professional feedback from produced
screenwriters and pay for coverage/development notes - it’s
worth it to help improve your work. C) Work with other
writers whose work you admire – get their feedback, and give
your feedback back to them. D) Take an acting class – you’d
be amazed how much you will learn that can help your
writing. E) Enter screenplay contests, both to see how you
stack up, and to get feedback on problems in your work. F)
Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite to make your work better and
better! Screenwriting is rewriting! G) Don’t give up. THE
BODYGUARD, which was written by Lawrence Kasdan, was
rejected 67 times before it was picked up. Then is wasin
development hell for 15 years. Love it or hate it, it
finally made it to the big screen, and it made tons of
money.
FilmMakers
Magazine: What's next for you?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw: On the writing front, Missing Sydney has
been extensively rewritten since my first draft was entered
into the Filmmakers International competition, and people
who know what they’re talking about seem to think it is
substantially improved. I have three othercompleted feature
screenplays and four television pilots. All of my scripts
are now either under serious consideration or have been
optioned by major production companies or television
networks. I’ve recently been hired to write a feature
screenplay from someone else’s idea. It looks like I’m going
to be hired to do an adaptation of a novel by a famous
author who’s had a long list of their other works turned
into movies over the years. I have several other ideas for
features and/or television shows, including a
sci-fi/thriller, an ensemble dark comedy,and a comedic heist
movie. These areall genres I haven’t tackled before, butI
like to testmy abilities and stretch myself in new ways
rather than doing the “same thing, but different.”
Outside of writing, I recently Executive Produced a short
filmtitled REFUEL. That was a great experience to learn how
a film is made.We’ll be taking REFUEL to major festivals
beginning this fall. I’m planning to direct a music video
later this summer for the musician who wrote and performed
the music for our short. I’m a Producer on a multi-million
dollar feature that I helped polish that will be shot this
fall. I will be shadowing and working on-set withthe
Director on that project, and hope tolearn a bit about the
art and craft of directing. I am interested in directing
features in the future, but only projects I’m personally
passionate about. On the business front I’m working with a
group of experienced industry executives and havecreated a
new production company. We’re in the process of raising a
multimillion-dollar equity fund for a slate of films –
hopefully 2 a year over the next five years, including
several co-productions in China and Korea.
FilmMakers Magazine: Where will you be five
years from now?
Ross Carey & Evan Shaw: If you had asked me five years ago where
I would be today, all of the things that I’ve done and that
have happened for me in the last two years wouldn’t have
been anywhere in my imagination. So who knows where I’ll be
five years from now, but hopefully still having the time of
my life -just like I am now!
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